Here's Chapter One of SoS! It was much longer, but I decided
to cut it into two different chapters. This one ends halfway through the
attack on the farm. Read & Review please! It was fun writing this,
it really was.
Chapter One: Fires of Earth
Rick
looked stupified; he had just fought his best friend, each trying to
kill the other, and he had one. He held the gun Shane aimed at his head
just moments before, and pulled the trigger; but he only heard a click.
No bang. No gunshot. No bullet. He looked at Shane, expecting him to
make his move, thinking that the he would take advantage of this moment.
But he only looked at him.
This wasn't what Shane had wanted.
Rick looked at him, expecting to see terror, anger grief, something in
his friends eyes; but he saw only disappointment. Shane wasn't scared,
and neither did he flinch. At all. "Dad?" Rick heard someone yell,
though he couldn't register who, at least not immediately. "Shane?
What's going on?"
Rick finally registered the voice, recognizing
it as being his son's. "Dad?" Carl yelled. Rick wondered if he had just
seen everything that happened between him and Shane. "Is something
wrong?" Rick saw his son running towards them.
"It's nothing
Carl!" Rick yelled. "Just go back to the farm!" He walked to his son
haggerdly, stumbling slightly from his brief fight with Shane.
Shane
stood up, and walked after Rick. "It's nothing to worry about, Little
Man!" Shane yelled to Carl. "Me and your old man just had small
disagreement over how we should handle this Randall situation!"
Rick
looked back Shane; why was he so calm? They had just tried to kill each
other, and he was so calm. Rick looked back at his son, then noticed
his terrified expression; thinking Shane was about to do something, he
turned around, only to see Shane limping over to them. With a walker
right behind him.
He saw Shane put his hands up. "Hey, whoa now
Carl. We were just having a little fight; put the gun down." Rick then
heard a gunshot that made his ears ring. He saw the walker's head bounce
back from the bullet that was fired, and fall to the ground, dead.
Shane dodged to his left to avoid the bullet, performing a combat roll,
though he wouldn't have needed to; the shot was dead on, having hit the
walker right in the forehead.
Rick looked back to see his son,
holding a smoking gun; not only had Carl just killed his first walker,
with a perfect shot no less, but he had saved Shane as well. Carl ran to
his father. "Dad!" He cried, "you can't be fighting Shane; that walker
would've gotten you both if I hadn't shown up!"
"I'm sorry Carl."
Rick pondered what had just happened; his fight with Shane, Carl saving
their lives, and his failed attempt at killing Shane. "It was just a
small fight. It won't happen again."
"Nice shot Little Man!" Rick
looked over to see Shane looking at the dead Walker, his face in an
expression of awe. He walked over to inspect it, holding his knife just
in case. "Right in the forehead! You're a goddamn crack-shot!" He kicked
the Walker, releasing some anger unto the undead creature.
"What were you guys fighting about?" Carl asked. "Must've been bad to make you not realize a Walker was near you."
Rick
looked back at Shane, who looked back at him; they didn't know how they
were supposed to explain what had happened, how they had almost fought
to the death. "We were arguing over what to do with Randall." Rick told
his son. "We-"
"I killed him." Shane interrupted. "That's why we were fighting Carl; your old man wanted to let him go, and I didn't."
"Oh."
Carl looked unfazed; he didn't understand that Shane had murdered him
earlier, that he hadn't escaped. "Well, he did attack you. I would've
done the same thing."
Rick looked at Shane; he didn't want to lie to
his son, and he didn't want Shane's murder to go unnoticed. Shane knew
what Rick wanted, and looked at Carl. "It's not like that." Shane said.
"I-"
A loud crunching sound was coming from behind the three of
them. They instinctively went for their guns, and began to walk toward
the sound, momentarily forgetting about their conversation. They walked
to the top of the hill, their facing twisting into terror as an army of
the undead coming their way. "Holy shit." Shane whispered under his
breath. They began to run.
Rick, Shane, and Carl began to make a
beeline for the farm, to warn the others of the impending army of
Walkers. Carl was moving slower than the adults. Rick looked back, and
was about to grab Carl to carry him, when he saw Shane do so before him.
He watched as Shane grabbed his son and ran as fast as he could to the
farm.
When they reached the edge of the farm, they saw hundreds of
Walkers all around the property. Shane put Carl on the ground, letting
him stand up; they would need all the man power they had to get to the
others. They ran for the house, killing Walkers that came near them,
either with a gun or a knife, and evaded others. Rick saw Carl shoot
Walkers dead, most with only one shot, but became worried; he wasn't
conserving his ammo, killing any Walker he came near rather than evade
them.
The house blocked by several dozen Walkers, they ran for the
barn, where Hershel had kept the Walkers before. They ran in and shut
the barn doors. "How the hell did this happen?" Rick asked. "How did we
not notice this?" Shane grabbed a beam of wood and placed it on the
metal carriers, locking them in.
"Our idiotic fighting, that's
how!" Shane yelled at him. Rick shot him a glare; Shane had acted as if
the fight was both fault, which they both knew was a lie. Ignoring
Rick's glare, Shane went for the ladder, grabbing it and picking it up
so they could climb to the upper level of the barn. "Carl," Shane said,
holding his hand out, "come on, you first."
Carl went for the
ladder, but was stopped by Rick. "Wait!" He said. "I have an idea." Rick
grabbed a can of gasoline that they kept in the barn and started to
splash it around the barn. "Carl." He said while splashing it on the
door to the barn. When finished with the gasoline, he took a lighter out
of his pocket and threw it to Carl. "You and Shane go up. I'm gonna
open the barn door, and when I tell you to, you throw the lighter."
"What?" Carl said. "What if-"
"No!"
Rick yelled at him. "Just do it!" Doing as his father told him, Carl
went as fast as he could up the ladder as he could, followed by Shane.
Shane
understood why Rick gave Carl the lighter; he didn't want him to burn
him to death, making some stupid excuse for doing so. The two stood
there, watching as Rick reloaded his gun, making sure he had bullets in
case the Walkers got near him. He went for the plank of wood and,
without hesitating for a single moment, pulled it up. He ran as fast as
he could for the ladder as the Walkers fell into the barn, holstering
his gun.
Rick climbed the ladder as quickly as he could; he didn't
think the Walkers would pile into the barn and fall, giving him plenty
of time to get to the ladder. The ladder then began to move. Rick looked
down to see three Walkers at the bottom, each trying to use the ladder.
The ladder fell in the struggle, and Rick nearly went with it, having
grabbed the edge of the second level before he fell, though only with
his fingers. He struggled not to fall.
"Dad!" Carl yelled. He ran for his father, but Shane grabbed him back. "Dad!"
"Carl!"
Rick yelled. He could feel the Walkers grabbing at his feet; he knew
that they would pull him down soon, and he knew that Carl wasn't strong
enough to pull him up. If anything, he would be pulled down with him.
"Run Carl! Go!"
"NO!" Carl screamed. "Shane, we have to help him! PLEASE!"
Shane
looked at Rick as he tried to think of what to do; he was afraid to try
and pull him up, for fear that they would both be eaten by Walkers, but
he was even more afraid of leaving Carl alone. He didn't think anymore.
Shane grabbed Carl, who screamed at the top of his lungs, fighting the
man who had been a second father to him. However, Carl stopped screaming
once he noticed that he was bringing him to his father.
Shane
grabbed Rick's arms, trying to pull him up, but some Walkers were
holding onto his feet, making him to heavy to lift. "You gotta shoot the
Walkers!" Shane yelled at Carl. "NOW!" Carl looked at Shane, then his
Dad, who he saw to have a look of disbelief on his face.
He aimed
his gun at the Walkers, firing a shot into the one holding Rick's right
leg, killing it. He aimed for the other Walker, only to hear a clicking
sound; the gun was empty. Shane pulled Rick up, groaning from the strain
of picking up both Rick and the Walker. Carl got down on his stomach
and grabbed his father's gun. He aimed at the other Walker and shot it
dead. Shane pulled once again, getting Rick up. The two looked at each
other, Rick with confusion, Shane with empathy.
"We gotta go."
Rick said, still looking at Shane. "Now." They began to walk out, when
Shane noticed the lighter on the floor, open and out. He stopped to pick
it up, making Rick and Carl stop as well. He ignited the flame, and
looked at Rick. He held the lighter out to him. Rick took the lighter
and walked to the edge of the platform; he saw the Walkers with their
hands in the air, trying to grab at them. He dropped the lighter setting
the gas aflame. The three of them then ran for the exit as flames
engulfed the barn, setting fire to every single Walker in it.
How
was it? I'm trying to make it complicated. I know some of you may be
asking; "What about Rick? Is he gonna be as hardened as he is in the
show?" Well, to tell you the truth, I don't know myself. Maybe, maybe
not. Please remember to Read & Review!
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I don't watch The Walking Dead, but I'm trying to follow along as best as I can. Not bad so far.
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