tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4100358369525212598.post9159563640796287575..comments2023-05-28T06:10:54.036-05:00Comments on The Fanfic Skeptic: "My Name is Kenny" Chapter 23: DestinyMarcus Absenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02833399226735178385noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4100358369525212598.post-7769924631191989322019-07-05T16:19:04.335-05:002019-07-05T16:19:04.335-05:00dude....dude WTF this.is.the.most.....AWESOMENESS ...dude....dude WTF this.is.the.most.....AWESOMENESS FANFICTION EVVVVER!...well only because I don't read much fanfics due to...well ships and improper sexual behavior..(cough) (cough) but this story had it all exposition, rising action, even the climax ended with a falling action...as well as the ending. seriously this story had every textural detail! you must have went through all your time and effort! every single detail went into this even the part when Kenny says Cartman of his full name. and I just loved the part about meeting Chef. but the constant struggle Kenny had to go through every time...actually made me feel sorry for him...but raping some school chick just to go to hell..may be a bit to much, no seriously we need to talk. not only that but this really did feel like a south park episode the fact that every one had their own part and role made me smile something south park used to do that is. however...there is ONE thing that you missed about Kenny someone that is as important to him as death himself...Karen. Karen has an important role in his life, like the most innocent creature in his dark world. he would risk anything. ANYTHING even his own IMMORTALITY, just to bring her back. As Mysterion, he IS her guardian angel. he would stick with her through thick and thin. sure, you did mention her, once. but she is one of the most important people in his life...or lives that is. so honestly what I would is actually get her to...ya know DIE in the story to make it more difficult for him. Marcus Absent, I hope on e day everyone will see this great story and have ideas of their own, like I did I mean it was kinda of a coincidence that I bumped into your story right after I made my own, you see I REALLY love south park in fact I just finished the 22nd season like a week ago (that's right I'm from the future OOOOOWHOOOooooo! and yes Trump would definitively be a terrible president.) and, as the writer that I am,*not really I'm like 12 years old and I can see already a bunch of spelling mistakes) I wondered why Kenny had immortality well I guess there were a few hints here and there in the show, but I really wanted to know so I made my own story which was either going to be titled "The Boy With The Curse" or "The Immortal" <br /><br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06144267145090803663noreply@blogger.com